Debbie

Debbie

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 [PROJECT COMPLETE] 


Debbie, Kenneth and Wayne went to the same high school.

Debbie was a kind of anti-system who dyed her hair purple, purposely neglected her looks and didn't give a damn about being overweight. She didn't socialize much with the other girls at school; her only buddy was Kenneth, a smart, quiet, discreet guy. Since Kenneth was a good friend of Wayne's, by necessity, she also hung out with Wayne.

Wayne was something else altogether: the school hunk that all the girls went for, and whom he happily consumed at the slightest opportunity. He wasn't stupid at all, but he was pretty lazy, and without Kenneth's help, he would have had a harder time finishing school.
For his part, Kenneth took advantage of Wayne's aura to hang out with the hot high-school girls Wayne was no longer interested in.

Nothing had ever happened between Kenneth and Debbie. They liked each other very much as friends, but nothing more. As for a relationship between Debbie and Wayne, it was only mentioned in Debbie's secret dreams, and while she made fun of the blond cheerleader girls, she was also jealous of those who had the opportunity to go out with him - which was just about all of them!
After high school, the three lost touch. Debbie spent a gap year traveling, while Kenneth studied industrial engineering.

After her travels, Debbie studied graphic design and photography. She fell in love with a student from the same school, but two years older. They moved into his home, where he began working while she finished her studies. All went well, until one day Debbie caught her boyfriend screwing one of her models.

She left him on the spot, but didn't know where else to go. It was precisely on that day that she ran into Kenneth, who was also finishing his studies in the same town. He offered to share the small apartment his parents were renting for him.

It was around this time that Debbie changed her mind about looking good. She watched her diet and radically changed her look. 

As the months went by, they also became romantically involved and ended up going out together. After two years together, they got married. Kenneth worked in a power station, while Debbie had a lot of work as a freelance graphic designer.

The story begins shortly after Kenneth received the kind of promotion you don't turn down: assistant chief engineer at a power plant near Miami. No sooner said than done: they're moving!

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    rrxm · 25 days ago
    Solid kinetic novel with a well written story. I'm curious to what Debbie will do after. It was mean to put a cliffhanger in the final and then saying "won't be continued" LOL.
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    merek · 1 months ago
    Hey. Congratulations for your wonderful games. I'de like to know if you will also release this final version of Debbie for Android and PC. Thanks.  
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      eHellJay · 1 months ago
      Is this free web version not enough ?
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    scnupage · 6 months ago
    Guess emojis don't work here. Supposed to have been a thumbs up not a bunch of question marks. Sorry
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      eHellJay · 6 months ago
      That's right. I use free versions of plugins and extensions. It would cost me $48 to enable emoticons, and I get next to nothing for the games... :-)
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        scnupage · 6 months ago
        hey Jay, I know the feeling.. I'm working on my own AVN. It's bloody hard work and as it's my first I have zero income from as yet. I bow to your enthusiasm to make the incredible quality games that you do. I hope one day I can produce equal quality that you do. High five mate
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          eHellJay · 4 months ago
          How is your project coming along?
          If you need help, let me know.
          Hang in there!
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            scnupage · 1 months ago
            I appreciate that Jay, it's coming along slowly. Renders take the most time. Script is almost there, so fingers crossed I can launch by the end of June.
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        scnupage · 6 months ago
        Thumbs up lol
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    Drakov · 6 months ago
    Beutifull Visual Novel !!! Let me guess: At the final Debbie leave Kenneth , for  Wayne dik !!! and after Wayne gets enough with her, he gives her a kick in her  ass,  and leave her  !!!!!
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      scnupage · 6 months ago
      I seriously hope not! I'm hoping she stays with Kenneth and has fond memories of being a cheating slut :). I hoped the deed would have been more akin to the ICBW coercion of  Natasha. I think we pushed Jay too hard to give us something and felt a bit rushed. In future I'll just stay quiet and wait for the result patiently. The scene was so dark I could hardly see what was happening, not sure if it's my graphics card or just dark anyway. Still, great stuff Jay and keep up the great work.
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        eHellJay · 6 months ago
        First of all, thanks for your comments.
        Why don't we let Debbie and Wayne finish off this New Year's Eve? It's only 3am and Ken's still at work!
        To continue, we need to understand the context. Wayne is single, Debbie is not. There's no need to rush things. Debbie may not want to leave a nice guy just because a former crush, with whom she had a fantasy, fucked her properly in particular circumstances. Cheating is undoubtedly reprehensible, but it's not a crime against humanity! As reminders: 1° we don't suffer for what we know nothing about, and 2° getting off the beaten track doesn't always mean changing direction!
        Besides, I don't want to make the same mistake twice. I haven't planned a sequel to Debbie, and there isn't going to be one. At least not immediately, and not without a good idea of where the story is heading. At the very least, you need a plot that will keep the player hooked in an intelligent way...

        We'll see...
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          Drakov · 6 months ago
          Maybe Wayne can call some friends , and invite them to a beautiful New Year Gang Bang  :) Anyway i mean it, when i say is a beautiful Visual Novel !!!!
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          scnupage · 6 months ago
          Nice one Jay 
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    rrxm · 7 months ago
    Very good episode.  I'm eager to see more of Debbie.
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    Drakov · 7 months ago
    You say yesterday, today you will release new update on Debbie!!! iI the comment above you say 2-3 days !!!! Is today the day or in 2-3 days !!!! I am confuse!!! No presure , just asking !!!! Merry Christmas Bro !!!! You are the best.
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      scnupage · 7 months ago
      He means two or three days from the time of his response to my question
      Feliz Navidad 
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    scnupage · 7 months ago
    Hi Jay, any news on when the final release of Debbie can be expected? Just wondering, no pressure :)
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      eHellJay · 7 months ago
      Two or three days. I'm a bit stuck with ICBW so I'm working on it.
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    scnupage · 8 months ago
    Ahhh what an uplifting sight that orange banner that say [CURRENT PROJECT] is :)
    Please let Debbie give it up.. the situation is perfect, the timing is perfect and the poor girl wants it so much. If you care anything for her you won't let her down lol.
    Seriously though mate, your doing great work, I only wish I could afford to up my subscription. Keep it up.
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    johnrickUY · 1 years ago
    I'd like to thank u sir for giving such a quality content like this even doe ur busy at the same  ur giving ur fans a time for this may you have more good health and have a blessed day